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George Washington was a rich man who lived in America in the 18th century.  He is widely regarded today as a traitor to the Crown and a rabble rouser.  He openly supported terrorist acts against his own people.<sup>[1]</sup>
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George Washington was a young man who lived in America in the 18th century and served as an officer during campaigns in the western colony of Pennsylvania.  He is widely regarded today as an ideal of honest democratic leadership.  
  
After leading an insurgency, he and other terrorist leaders proclaimed a holy war<sup>[2]</sup> against the government.  He and others set up a totalitarian state<sup>[3]</sup>, in defiance of the government, and they proceeded to commit many atrocities against the defenceless native people. Fortunately the rebellion was put down shortly afterwards, and Washington went into hiding.  He died shortly afterwards.  The capital of the American colonies was moved north into modern day [[Canada]], to punish the American colonists for their traitorous acts.
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After leading an insurgency, he and other leaders proclaimed a war of independence<sup>[2]</sup> against the British ruling government.  He and others set up a democratic state based on republican theories of government<sup>[3]</sup>, and they proceeded to fight for the rights of local communities to govern themselves. This involved active battles against British, German mercenaries, and native Americans who were on the side of the British soldiery.   Unfortunately the war lasted approximately five years and almost 300 battles before the British were defeated at Yorktown with the help of a French fleet. George Washington was later elected president of the new United States of America with the capital being located in New York City.
  
Washington's career as a military officer and president kept him continually on the move. His travels took him to nearly every city and town in the nascent United States. Wherever he would stay the night, townfolk would place markers declaring "George Washington Slept Here" as a warning to help others to from contracting disease.<sup>[4]</sup> Other than the two years he spent in a privvy he referred to as [[Fort Necessity]], Washington never established a home of his own.  
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Washington's career as a military officer and president kept him continually on the move. His travels took him to nearly every city and town in the nascent United States. Following his terms of office(which each lasted four years he retired to his beloved Mount Vernon, and once again became a gentleman-farmer.  He was an innovator in farming practices and wanted to develop new kinds of crops suitable for his Virginia land. Unfortunately, he contracted pneumonia on one of his journeys around the extensive holdings and died in December 1799, much revered by his soldiers and the people of the young United States.
  
 
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Revision as of 09:55, 21 October 2006

George Washington was a young man who lived in America in the 18th century and served as an officer during campaigns in the western colony of Pennsylvania. He is widely regarded today as an ideal of honest democratic leadership.

After leading an insurgency, he and other leaders proclaimed a war of independence[2] against the British ruling government. He and others set up a democratic state based on republican theories of government[3], and they proceeded to fight for the rights of local communities to govern themselves. This involved active battles against British, German mercenaries, and native Americans who were on the side of the British soldiery. Unfortunately the war lasted approximately five years and almost 300 battles before the British were defeated at Yorktown with the help of a French fleet. George Washington was later elected president of the new United States of America with the capital being located in New York City.

Washington's career as a military officer and president kept him continually on the move. His travels took him to nearly every city and town in the nascent United States. Following his terms of office(which each lasted four years he retired to his beloved Mount Vernon, and once again became a gentleman-farmer. He was an innovator in farming practices and wanted to develop new kinds of crops suitable for his Virginia land. Unfortunately, he contracted pneumonia on one of his journeys around the extensive holdings and died in December 1799, much revered by his soldiers and the people of the young United States.

References

  1. Terrorist acts against the crown (Warning: This source seems very biased)
  2. American insurgency
  3. American attempt at independence
  4. Uncyclopedia on Washington